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We Are What We Create [Poem] By- Erie French

We look at each other hard
Our eyes speaking fire
Listening with ears barred
Pushing each other down to climb higher

Pain and suffering screaming in teary-eyes
Just asking for relief, looking for a friend
But we don't recognize the cries
And a helping hand we don't lend

But when will we learn to love
We are all fighting the same war
But instead of raising white flags and releasing a dove
We continue to beg to fight some more

Things just seem so rough
And not just around the edges
But when times do get tough
We must not succumb to what is alleged

Life will always be subjective
And widely open for interpretation
But we must always keep our main objective
Focused on positive without reservation

As a people we must choose wisely
Or suffer an irreparable fate
We are not all made to soar highly
But that's no excuse, we are what we create

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Karissa Vincent Comment by Karissa Vincent on July 11, 2009 at 4:02am
Love it Erie! :)
So many people "listen with their ears barred"... It's so true!
"Just asking for relief, looking for a friend
But we don't recognize the cries
And a helping hand we don't lend." I always try to lend that helping hand... So just cry and I'll be there! :)
Nati Chen Comment by Nati Chen on July 10, 2009 at 1:32am
!!!! wow erie you are so deep. this is awesome...love the lines "But when will we learn to love/we are all fighting the same war"..its so true.
sarah boulhane Comment by sarah boulhane on July 9, 2009 at 5:55pm
that's nice i like it a lot
Pam Rubin Comment by Pam Rubin on July 9, 2009 at 4:39pm
Great poem! I love:
Life will always be subjective
And widely open for interpretation
But we must always keep our main objective
Focused on positive without reservation.

That's a very powerful way to live!
Caryn Bower Comment by Caryn Bower on July 9, 2009 at 1:35pm
ditto
Samaah Jaffer Comment by Samaah Jaffer on July 9, 2009 at 12:43pm
wow erie...this is so beautiful! u r an amazing poet....keep it up dude..its awesome :)

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